The first day Edward saw her, he was on his walk around the pond on his lunch hour & she was sitting on a bench reading. With her head tilted forward over her reader, her long chestnut hair slightly hid her face. As Edward got closer, the sun picked up the gold & red highlights in her hair, forming a corona around her head in the bright sunshine. When they were almost even, she glanced up & Edward thought he would fall into her deep chocolate eyes as they nodded at each other in acknowledgement. Edward walked on as his heart pounded loudly in his ears. When he returned to work Edward could not get this woman out of his mind. She haunted his dreams that night & the next day as his lunch hour approached, Edward could feel his pulse tripping faster at the thought of seeing her again.
There she was! Edward fought against quickening his pace so he could savor the sight of her. She raised her head just a second sooner & their eye contact lasted just a little longer today. Every detail of her face filled his thoughts – her pink slightly parted lips, her slightly upturned nose, her perky chin & those deep brown eyes with tiny flecks of gold. On the third day her lips turned up ever so slightly when he appeared & he smiled back at her.
On the fourth day, the word “hello” slipped between her lips & Edward thought her voice was smooth as honey. He wanted to stop & talk to her but was afraid he would scare her away. All he could say was hello. Edward now looked forward to weekdays much more than weekends because there was a chance he would see her & there she was again on Monday.
But on Tuesday, instead of her, there was a note where she usually sat.
Dear Sir with the Kind Eyes,
Please help me! I have been taken against my will. There are 2 possibilities for where I am being kept – please contact Nicole or Cheeky. Please, I beg of you, rescue me before it is too late!
Edward looked all around him, but it appeared no one was watching him. He jogged back to his desk to start his search.
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To continue this story, please go to the following blogs to see how Edward proceeds from here:
Nicole http://wordsandotherthings.wordpress.com/ In Outer Space
Cheeky http://thecheekydiva.com/ Private Eye
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For even more information about Hotspur’s birthday bash, please go to these blogs:
Cheeky http://thecheekydiva.com/
Hasty http://hastywords.wordpress.com/
SandyLikeABeach http://sandylikeabeach.wordpress.com/
PMAO http://pouringmyartout.wordpress.com/
Sparkle Bumps http://sparklebumpsthebookwhore.wordpress.com/
LizzieC http://runningnakedwithscissors.com/
HR http://hrnightmare.wordpress.com/
GingerSnaap http://ohmygawdjustdowhatisay.wordpress.com/
Heellis http://heellisgoa.com/
Jan 09, 2013 @ 06:33:13
Wonderfully done, Benze! Can’t wait to see what happens next…
(Seriously, I have absolutely no idea…)
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Jan 09, 2013 @ 11:42:18
Thanks Guaps, I can’t wait to see too!
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Jan 09, 2013 @ 07:01:21
Jan 09, 2013 @ 07:14:39
Beautifully written, Benze!
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Jan 09, 2013 @ 11:43:08
Thanks!
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Jan 09, 2013 @ 07:21:14
Jan 09, 2013 @ 13:15:55
A beautiful Hotspur tribute!
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Jan 09, 2013 @ 16:10:59
Thank you, I was trying to use information he has provided about his lunchtime walks & a description of Salma Hayek without using her name since I know these are things he likes. Hope he has the best birthday ever!
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Jan 09, 2013 @ 16:17:17
I KNEW IT WAS SALMA HAYEK! Nice job, a really great story, and I want to see how it ends. You should finish that and publish it. You can change the name so it doesn’t seem so self serving. Thank you Benz, for doing this for me, and thank you everyone for playing along with Guapo Bell. I appreciate it!
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Jan 09, 2013 @ 17:18:47
You’re welcome Hotspur! I tried to incorporate details from your likes into it to make it even more personal. Happy Birthday!
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Jan 09, 2013 @ 20:42:41
It was great!
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Jan 09, 2013 @ 16:37:32
Nice! Since we all wrote something weird and random, will you finish the story for us? I was dying to know more!!! 🙂
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Jan 09, 2013 @ 17:20:03
I’ll see what I can do! We should do a “story round” sometime, where one starts a story, the next person adds to it, on & on & around & around to make a whole story.
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Jan 09, 2013 @ 17:43:48
I know there are people on WP who do that, it sounds like fun!
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Jan 10, 2013 @ 10:43:39
Interesting idea! Well done on your part.
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Jan 10, 2013 @ 16:27:09
Thanks Mark!
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Jan 12, 2013 @ 22:05:42
Great story! I hope you finish it! 🙂
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Jan 13, 2013 @ 00:21:45
I have to check with Cheeky Diva to see if she will let me borrow her private investigator character. I’ve had a few people suggest I finish the story & I like the character she started & I think I could do something with this kind of character.
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Jan 13, 2013 @ 16:10:04
It was a great story, but I’m hanging out by my feet from the LV building in San Francisco waiting for the finish! The wind is blowing right through my down coat, and I don’t have wings. So you’d better finish it or I’ll be finished!!!! 🙂
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Jan 13, 2013 @ 16:24:40
Waiting for permission from Cheeky Diva, so I can continue the story!
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Jan 13, 2013 @ 16:32:53
🙂
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Jan 14, 2013 @ 18:15:42
CheekyDiva didn’t reply, but I didn’t want you hanging by your heels any longer, so I posted Part Deux today!
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Jan 14, 2013 @ 18:24:35
Wahoo!!!!!!
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Jan 14, 2013 @ 14:13:24
Very well done, benze. I will proceed to directly wish Mr. Hotspur a belated Happy Birthday as I work my way through my backlog. Again. (Repetitious, ain’t I? 😀 )
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Jan 14, 2013 @ 18:17:19
Hope you are feeling better John! Have been missing you!
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Jan 15, 2013 @ 14:48:04
Thanks! I’m sorta caught up, so I’ll try to get to your awards later tonight. If not, you’ll be #1 in the morning!
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